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Dialogue for Yung Ae's original series: Kiddo

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Palantir: Hello, Jesse. It is a pleasure to speak with you. You don`t know me, but I am most certainly aware of you.
Main chara: What is this? Who are you?
Palantir: Patience. All good things come to those who wait.
Main chara: [Pause.]
Palantir: Good. Your recent accomplishment has caught my attention, and I am impressed that there is someone else here of a similar caliber of intelligence as I. However, from time to time, you will not have the resources you require, and that is where I will come in to assist you.
Main chara: What do you get from this?
Palantir: What did I say about patience? Anyway, in return, you will do something for me. Nothing large like murder, just small favors, such as package deliveries and message sending. And no one will know of your involvement. Deal?
Main chara: I don`t know. I don`t know who are, but I know you`re someone shady.
Palantir: Hate to say this, my dear, but there will always be someone shady in this line of work. Just ask your missing father, if you can find him.
Main chara: What do you know about him?
Palantir: That is need-to-know. If I determine you need to know, then you will know. Capisce?
Main chara: [pause.] Alright, but what do I call you?
Palantir: My birth name no longer applies to me. Very few people know of me, and fewer still know me. They, you included, know me as Palantir. [Hangs up]
Welp. You guys asked for the dialogue between the main character and the antagonist (Palantir). Some of you may or may not remember Palantir from other short previews.... If yes, great!! :D If not, well then, what Arthur (we'll call my classmate "Arthur" even though that's not his real name) and I have so far is:
Palantir's a mysterious underground crime boss who's always evading the police. uh- lesse.... No one really knows what his name is or what he looks like. All they know is that he's responsible for all of these big heists, etc. He (Palantir) occasionally will anonymously help the police with their own work.
Palantir's relevance to the series and to the main character is that he knows all about her (her family, her drive to solve cases, etc.) and uses her ability and skill that matches in "a similiar caliber of intelligence" as an errand girl for his dealings ("nothing large like murder, just small favors, such as package deliveries and message sending").
He also knows the whereabouts to her father's location (and may or may not know of what happened to him.... Arthur and I are still working out the details of that).


uh-- that's it for now. :D this dialogue is still a work-in-progress, so when the final chapter gets published, the dialogue may be different.
also, the main character's name is a still undecided, so "Jesse" may be changed to something else.
I have a little bit of the main character's background and family near completion. So, if I don't fall into the Valley of Procrastination, you'll see a few work-in-progress character files soon. no guarantee though.
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dialogue/plotline for dialogue (c) jjungg and Arthur.
Palantir and the main character (c) jjungg and Arthur.
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Greenzebra00's avatar
OMN I want more!!